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Post by AlixRobinson on 22nd July 2010, 4:51 am

. : oo2 . Needle : .

“S-stop it.”

The words were too weak, too quiet. But he must have heard her, because he smiled. He lifted his hand to show her the object he clasped in it.

A syringe, filled with a liquid too green to be anything but some kind of poison.

At the end - a long, sharp needle, dripping the substance onto the tile floor beneath his feet.

“Stop,” she said again. Tears ran down her face now, burning whenever they ran into the open cuts on her cheeks. “Please.

He laughed – sick, twisted, evil. He walked towards her – shoes clicking on linoleum.

She tried to scream, but it was muffled as he clapped one hand, hard, over her mouth. She whined, eyes blurring.

“It really is too bad,” he sighed, shaking his head, black eyes glittering maliciously. “You’re so young, but you’ve become such a problem.”

Another sob choked into his hand.

He smirked – disgusting, like his laugh.

He moved his hand to clench a large majority of her sweat-and-blood slicked hair, pulling the strands away from her face and neck.

“They’ll find me here,” she said, trying to stop the quiver in her voice. “They’ll know it was you, and you’ll never escape them.”

Kong Li frowned at her. “Such insolence,” he said, “when you are clearly in no place to defy me.”

He brought the needle closer to her exposed neck, pressing the sharp tip against her flesh.

Brynn stared at the man and uttered only one sentence to him before he stuck the end of the syringe into her vein.

“They’ll kill you for this.”


v-v-v-v-v-v

It's official, I've crossed the line.
I've tortured a character that doesn't belong to me.

I'm so sorry, Thallie, but I got this idea and it wouldn't go away D:<
You're allowed to do whatever the crap you want to Tyko to make up for this, btw.

And she didn't die. She was probably, like, on the brink of death and Sid crashed through the window of the warehouse with, like, a cape on or something and was all like, "I WILL BE SAVING YOU NAO" and then he did. Yeah. Head canon ftw.


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Re: oo2. Needles

Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 4:57 am

SUPER SID TO THE RESCUE!!!!!

Last time he did that he ended up destroying half the town and summoning boar warriors or something.
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Post by AlixRobinson on 22nd July 2010, 5:06 am

...Yeah, Sid probably shouldn't be a hero.


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Post by swim2live on 22nd July 2010, 5:12 am

WolfieStar wrote:SUPER SID TO THE RESCUE!!!!!

Last time he did that he ended up destroying half the town and summoning boar warriors or something.

heeheeheehee im still giggling

Wow Alix. I mean wow. I can see why you take pride in the way you write horror, you're great at it!
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Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 5:13 am

SO GOOOOOOOOD.

I love horror cause it has angst.

And I life off of angst.
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Post by AlixRobinson on 22nd July 2010, 5:13 am

Haha, thanks!
I always love it when people say that. Makes me smile on the inside. And the outside, too!

I don't know why, but I've always been fascinated with the human psyche when it comes to things as raw as torture. How does the human mind react? What do they process first? What do they think about in the face of absolutely certain death?

I dunno, maybe I'm just a sick person. Lick


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Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 5:14 am

AlixRobinson wrote:Haha, thanks!
I always love it when people say that. Makes me smile on the inside. And the outside, too!

I don't know why, but I've always been fascinated with the human psyche when it comes to things as raw as torture. How does the human mind react? What do they process first? What do they think about in the face of absolutely certain death?

I dunno, maybe I'm just a sick person. Lick

Strangely enough, I think the exact same thing. It's all so interesting.
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Post by swim2live on 22nd July 2010, 5:21 am

yeah i often think about my characters screaming at night *wierd* i love angsty emotional stories but i never thought of writing a horror until now
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Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 5:23 am

I always thought it was the same thing.
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Post by swim2live on 22nd July 2010, 5:32 am

emotion is anything even sadness. angst is usually anger. but thats just my view
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Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 5:39 am

I always thought Angst was depression, anger, desperation...ect.
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Post by ThaliaAnderson on 22nd July 2010, 6:51 am

Ahh hahah, the entire time I was reading this I was like, "POOR TYKO" (because I assume your "she's" are Tyko, naturally XD), and then I get to the end, and I have like, the biggest WTF on my face before I crack up laughing. XD

Pffff, you know you own her as much as I do. XD Do whatever the crud you want to her. I don't really care if she had died, lmao. XD

Although Iunno, that image of Sid and cape makes me want to melt inside. XD

You give me shivers the way you write horror stuff. I lovez it; for realz.

...
Not for fakes.
You were thinking it.
*shot*


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Post by AlixRobinson on 22nd July 2010, 7:20 am

AGH I WAS.

SCREW YOU CANDY.

Yeah, well, take that mental image of Sid in a cape...
...
...
AND ADD A SUPERMAN SPEEDO.
WAHAHAHAHA.
I AM SO WEIRD RIGHT NOW.

And I'm glad you like how I write horror. It's one of the only genres I feel comfortable in


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Post by ThaliaAnderson on 22nd July 2010, 10:24 am

PFFFFT.
CANDY PWNS YER SOUL.

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lmao.
XD
Sid in a speedo.

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NOBODY DRAW THAT.


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Post by DragonWarriorClaire34 on 25th July 2010, 4:36 pm

Nice. Oh dear god, nobody draw ANY male OC in a speedo please. XD

Nice Alix. I had no clue who it was until you told me. Needles are scary, yet I sew with them anyway. XD
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Post by swim2live on 28th July 2010, 11:50 pm

*is seriously considering drawing characters in Speedos because of her swimming obsession*
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