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013 Fangs

Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 5:05 am

Fangs

Sue blinked, staring at the wolf leaning over the girl who had tried to kill her over jealously. Vitani, once Gary’s best friend and likely the only girl who was also a demon wolf, laid dead under her boyfriend and love of her life. He blinked, the blood dripping off of his fangs, enlarged with rage and hatred.

“Die you f****** b****!” he screeched. “I love Sue! Not you!”

Vitani’s eyes were dull as blood gushed from her neck. Gary roared, baring his fangs at the pathetic blonde. His fangs were died red, and still dripping with blood. The wolf’s fangs were always visible, even as a human, and the blood dripping from them was . . . Too much for Sue.

“Gary . . .” she whispered. “You just killed someone . . .”

“For you!” he roared, looking at her. His eyes were even glowing red. “She deserved to die!”

“Gary . . .” tears starting running down her cheeks. She didn’t even recognize the wolf standing before her. How could she love someone so violent?

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my my, isn't it short? also kinda of a preview/spoiler for my fan fic.

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Post by swim2live on 22nd July 2010, 5:18 am

WOO!! it was like a roller coaster! once u get on, u dont want to get off but its so short and ur sad it ended!! that was amazing, Star. I love the stuff u write!

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Post by WolfieStar on 22nd July 2010, 5:19 am

lol, you'll get the full thing soon. This is actually towards the end of Gary's story, so yus it's a spoiler.

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Post by swim2live on 22nd July 2010, 5:21 am

ON MY WAY!!

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Post by DragonWarriorClaire34 on 25th July 2010, 4:41 pm

NICE. I love descriptions of animals combined with horror and humans. LOL, what a strange combo. Nice work Gary! You are always so great with emotions. XD

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